DextaGethood's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'm Not a Doll]

quite a fun short game, I am hoping some of the clothes suggestions the artists gave for this creature will be put in but I understand if you get busy or lack motivation for it.

Idk who she is so I'm gonna call it Spara for short of sleep paralysis

things i found:
-cutscene dialogue music doesn't loop when it finished playing
-even when Spara is naked, the play button is still there which is funny [maybe put a new dialogue to reward the player for discovering that?] 'i can't go out naked you dork!'
-the dress-up background is just the image zoomed in and out quickly which i found hilarious

I don't feel like i can fully review it if you plan to add more things, but for now I'd say it's a good play! I somehow managed to get the dialogue options i needed in 10 mins.

P.S. sexy ending when? ;)

Thetageist responds:

The clothes from the forum thread weren’t supposed to go into the game, because I didn’t want to offend anyone by saying their artwork was an outfit the character didn’t like.

Will be fixing those bugs and probably working on a remastered bg. Didn’t know you stuck around on the ending cutscene long enough for it to not loop - I wasn’t anticipating anyone would.

Sexy ending will happen, but not how you think it will.

[Entity Creator: Lolita Fashion edition]

pretty earrie. I felt uneasy while playing this, kinda like making the perfect wife with science. I'd say the music does a really good job on making that uneasy feeling and such. I liked my design but it ended up looking like sonia nevermind from danganronpa 2 lol.
there's also no way to go back to the dress up settings after pressing the green button.
This is a good game and hope it performs well in the costume jam

[Super Hero Costume Maker]

this is a pretty cool dress-up game. must have taken a while to draw all the ideas for a superhero. I'd say the only thing is to put a back button after choosing male or female. good job with layering everything as well. but it does need a more-fine tuned theme song.

PerKGrok responds:

Thanks for the feedback.
At the lower right corner you have a link to the "Mainpage", that will send you back to the main page. It could have been made more obvious that it is a button.
The song is something I thru together quickly. I'll agree there is plenty of room for improvement there. Music is not my strongest skill. 😕
It is possible that I will do a version 2 at some point of time. I have couple of ideas. Some that just are putting in the work (in some cases a lot of additional work) and some that I don't yet know how to do.